Your video work and the evaluation:

Comment on the best bits: Some very clean shots and very good hand held work. The camera positions are excellent. An excellent edit.

Things you can improve: Hand held work has to be better still, though!

Marks are out of 3 for this:

0 means you haven't done it.

1 is lowest - it means that there is a lot that needs to be done, but that you have the material to sort it out and make it work.

2 means that you've done the job competently and it is OK.

3 means that you've done some parts of it really very well, and should work to exploit this.

CAMERA

Medium Shot MS 3

Long Shot LS 3

Close Up CU 3

XLS - extreme long shot 2

XCU - extreme close up 2

Pan 3

Tilt 3

Zoom 3

Cross focus 1

Deep focus 2

Tracking shot (dolly, hand held, shoulder shot) 3

Point of View - POV 2

Use of tripod 2

EDIT

Shot - reverse shot 2

Establishing shot 3

Cut 2

Dissolve 2

Total out of 54 = 41

76% B

Evaluation: clearly done, could do with a bit more detail. 90%, A