Comment on the best bits: Some very clean shots and very good hand held work. The camera positions are excellent. An excellent edit.
Things you can improve: Hand held work has to be better still, though!
Marks are out of 3 for this:
0 means you haven't done it.
1 is lowest - it means that there is a lot that needs to be done, but that you have the material to sort it out and make it work.
2 means that you've done the job competently and it is OK.
3 means that you've done some parts of it really very well, and should work to exploit this.
Medium Shot MS 3
Long Shot LS 3
Close Up CU 3
XLS - extreme long shot 2
XCU - extreme close up 2
Cross focus 1
Deep focus 2
Tracking shot (dolly, hand held, shoulder shot) 3
Point of View - POV 2
Use of tripod 2
Shot - reverse shot 2
Establishing shot 3
Total out of 54 = 41
Evaluation: clearly done, could do with a bit more detail. 90%, A